Assignment 22A – Elevator Pitch No. 3

1) Link for Elevator Pitch No. 3:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3toVT-Oacuw&feature=youtu.be

2) The feedback that I received on my previous elevator pitch shows that I did improve a lot from the first time and that I perfected it my second time. The feedback that I found important is that eye contact and the practice that I put into the pitch will help me reach my audience. The feedback I received on my power stance shows it was a key factor this time with proper eye contact, enthusiasm and knowledge of my pitch. Based on the feedback on my previous pitch, it shows that I rose to the challenge of fixing and perfecting my pitch. This new improved pitch will allow me to connect with my audience better about my product/service mix.

3) According to the feedback, I did not change anything with my previous pitch because I received positive feedback and nothing negative to improve on for this new pitch. Even though the feedback was all positive, I decided to self-critique my elevator pitch and do some minor fixes. I decided to dress up nicer for this final elevator pitch. Next, I practiced and memorized my speech more so I can make sure there is even better eye contact on this pitch. Finally, I fixed up the speech by fixing anything grammatically so it can flow better.

4) I found a lot different from the first time to this time that I completed the elevator pitch. My pitch is almost or is memorized because of the amount of times that I practiced and did the pitch. I am a lot more comfortable speaking to the camera and looking at it as if I was talking to a real audience. Finally, the pitch is overall better now after three times than it was the first time. This is due to the increased practice and knowing my pitch better, so I am more confident about my product/service mix.